Cover the song "Bersamamu" Vierratale

Listening to music is one of my hobbies since I was little, so I started singing various kinds of songs that I listened to in various places such as radio and DVD, on this occasion I will sing one of the songs that were popular a few years ago brought by Vierratale band titled "Bersamamu" the song that I brought is pop genre and tells about the togetherness of a long time lovers together, the lyrics reflect a woman who wants to be with her lover and she is also very happy. he hopes everything is fine so he will be loyal to his partner. if a lot of errors please provide constructive comments. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVv_6fXi-XE